really good, you are on the right track, although i do have a minor crit, and believe me, it's something i have to watch out for all the time. the background, great bokeh, etc, but, those lights obscure the candle flames, and in fact on the left seems to be growing out of it, now maybe you can't move the candles,change the angle or whatever, but maybe you can next time be aware, trust me, i do the old lampost out of the head far more often than i like to admit. and this is sort of personal preference, flame is really neat when captured, i always try to make that the center point. maybe that's why i like being a fireman so much, and no, i haven't gone over to the dark side